Hey guys just a simple article i wrote focuses more on the players . Enjoy !
http://kk-gaming.co.za/home/m/2411622/article/446715
Professionalism in SA gaming
Hey guys just a simple article i wrote focuses more on the players . Enjoy !
http://kk-gaming.co.za/home/m/2411622/article/446715
A valiant attempt, but requires a lot of work. There's potential, but the amount of grammatical, spelling and other technical errors in the article is pretty appalling to say the least (typing it in Word first can get rid of the first two issues almost entirely). Your article seemed to work itself to a certain point, which is a good thing, as it's not just a collection of disjointed tidbits with no bearing on each other. However, if someone who hasn't read it yet were to ask me to summarize it for them or explain what it's about, I'd honestly have to tell them that I'm not even sure myself.
Still, +1 for the attempt. There's potential, it just requires a fair bit of work and polish. Also, the fact that you managed to speak to someone working in the industry (Pieter "Cyrus" Venter) about the topic is a nice touch.
Tbh i was bored yesterday , so just did it for fun . Dont know were the mistakes are but my word is on US English not on UK other than that i know my tenses is not the most advanced in the world . Yes its a bit confusing if your not a hardcore gamer .
Fixed it for youOriginally Posted by PolisieP3rd
Grammar Nazi strikes!!!!
(Heil Grammar! I am one too)
Thank you , you are like the English teacher i never had !
I thought Pokemon Nazi's were bad ....Grammar Nazi strikes!!!!
(Heil Grammar! I am one too
/saluteGrammar Nazi strikes!!!!
(Heil Grammar! I am one too
hahaha... Glad to be of assistance :3
We have CoD tournaments- a game which is hardly competitive overseas...
Interesting article though :P
true , and the rules we use compared to what they use is also differ. But luckily games like Starcraft2 and LOL is the same here.
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