The Curiosity Rovers makes a discovery on Mars!

[Joofville]

[FrAgMaStEr]

What animation software do you use man?

[FrAgMaStEr]

I say, it needs more epicness.

Like more/faster motion.Put a bit of looney into it since the videos are short.Make it explosive you know? Not literally.But you know?

Like clever ideas, you know?


Here's what i liked:
>He swims looks up after swimming: 0:20

But i guess this is just based on how i like my cartoons, looney toonish.If it's anything else it better be good.

Things i like about cartoons that are non looney toonish:
>If 3D better be fun and action packed, well rendered or original.
>Nice and twist story
>Good colouring

These can be implemented in shorts too.

Summary applying to you:
>Make them clever ideas
>Give the story a funny objective
>More expression and motion

Anyway, it is good that you continue and have not "quit".I hope you find something useful from my feedback.