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    Quote Originally Posted by Saint_Dee View Post
    Posting mine in a few minutes. Would be cool to have some competition
    Gief diretide story! Volvo pls!

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    I was designed and created to be the perfect killer, with exceptional abilities, along with a stark lack of emotion, all beyond any rational measure; the product of genetic engineering that was ahead of the curve, while the law regarding such science was behind the times. At this point in my life I was still a Hitman, but I hadn’t gone by the Codename Agent 47 for a good while, I was just 47. I’d been a part of many known and unknown agencies that required an efficient weapon, and truth be told, I was the most efficient weapon any agency could hope for, as each agency found out in the wake of the clean destruction I left at my exodus. The Deus Ex: Human Revolution? I was there for their Invisible War against the Legacy of Kain and their Soul Reaver faction, religious extremists who define Deus Ex as a heretic movement because of its advancements in human augmentation. I was there for The Fall of both. I was a Silent Assassin, yet the aftermath of my hits was anything but, I’d had Contracts before, and most times, Blood Money was involved, but this particular assignment was a personal, one of Absolution...

    I was an archaeologist by profession, and a scholar with a propensity for dangerous curiosity by nature. This was until my maiden expedition turned from intriguing to disastrous and terrifying to exhilarating, and it was pretty much the fiery crucible from which a timid archaeologist was forged into a Thief, a Legend, and a creature known to the archaeological underground as the Tomb Raider. Pity the foe that would have come between me and my next hidden treasure or discovery. My latest expedition was not my attempt at making my mark on this world (The lost Kingdom of Yamatai already granted me this). Instead, I’d come to this point hoping to find the truth behind a Mayan prophecy that was known to the archaeological underground as The Last Revelation. Little did I know my expedition would reveal a darker secret than I could have imagined...

    I’d been tracking a group by going by the name The Dark Project, and they were working on toppling the world, and I had to stop it. This led me to this isolated island, a very lush island might I add, extremely off the beaten path, which is seems like the best locale to plot world domination away from prying eyes. It was seven ‘o clock with the sun having set, which made tracking a squad of three guards to the base of operations very easy (my keen abilities might be an unfair advantage, but we are what we are). The base was heavily guarded and had a cliff covering the eastern side, with guards patrolling the perimeter at regular intervals, while sentries were posted on the three towers on close to the south and west entrances. This mission was not going to be of the quiet variety, by the look of things. I moved silently toward the west entrance since it had the least number of guards- two posted by the gated with the sentry at the west tower. I decided to set up some C4 along the weak points of the wall, and as soon as I saw the guard at the far end of the wall turn a corner on his parameter run, I swiftly moved toward the guard closer to me, strafing across the wall, to avoid the view of the tower sentry. As I closed in on him, I targeted a pressure point on the neck then proceeded to strangle him with some fibre wire, rendering him incapacitated. I then followed the path of the guard who’d taken a corner, then waited at the corner for him to make his return. Soon enough, he made his way back, and before he could turn the corner, I lunged at his neck, noting his look of horror; I dropped him with a leg sweep and let my grip on his neck do the rest. It was time to let the game of Deadly Shadows end. I immediately set off the explosives I’d placed prior to taking down the two guards, leaving the entire west wall destroyed, and the tower crashing down with its occupant probably falling to his demise. With that, chaos ensued...

    Following trails outlined by research led to a cavern hidden beneath the cover of a waterfall, and the cave had no place existing, it wasn’t documented, it was in the middle of nowhere, and worse, it seemed desolate. This left rather despondent, as I got the feeling my research had led on a wild goose hunt. Instead of leaving my hunt, I picked a rather claustrophia inducing tunnel and made my way through the clammy space. It could have been thirty minutes, but it sure felt like days before I saw what seemed be an open space. Through more walking, I discovered what appeared to be a rocky doorway with two miniature statues at each side, each with a hand stretched out towards its opposite. With torch in hand, I inspected the figures, and I couldn't believe my eyes. These were the Guardian of Light, and the Angel of Darkness that my research had alluded to. I immediately had an idea of how to open the door; I stood right between the two figures, their outstretched hands conveniently spaced out so that I could grab a hold of both. Then I pulled as hard as I could. What happened next left me in momentary awe; the both pairs of eyes of the statues illuminated in a hypnotic green hue, followed by the door opening upwards. Inside though, I was greeted by about five guards guarding a humongous piece of circular machinery that seemed to be powering up with its neon lights (goodness), and these guards had their assault rifles aimed at me. Without a moment’s thought, I threw my torch in the air above them, and then tossed my pair of side axes at two of them. As the axes found their targets and dropped them, I ran to the nearest cover I could find in the confusion, and as I peeked over, I realized just how grave the situation I’d put myself in was, as an explosion blew off a wall ahead me right behind the guards. In the inferno, a bald man donning a suit that seemed to showing off some wear and tear from a serious fire fight dashed in aiming knives at two of the remaining guards, while catching the remaining guard with a close line tackle. Behind him, was an army hungry for blood, and I immediately decided this was friend, not foe...

    I was like a panther with a bearing gifts of death, taking out mercenaries without a thought or worry for my own well-being. I’d managed to infiltrate the base after the confusion I created outside gave me an opening, but with this next explosion, the entire base’s defense would converge on me, but I didn't care as set off the explosives, bringing down this inner wall to expose what seemed to be a cavern of sorts and it appeared I may have not been the only one causing chaos as took down three more guards, spotting a young woman who appeared to have been involved in some fighting of her own, with some casualties that weren't downed by own hands. She must have found another entrance on the east side of the base, which didn't make sense since it was cliff side of the base. Moving from my confusion upon having found a momentary ally, I spotted what I’d come here to destroy, the doomsday device in all its neon glory. Its demise would not be pretty as I came packing every explosive you could imagine. As I moved towards the machine, the cavern lighting system came on, as the army I’d been hunting and evading finally made its way to me, forcing me to find refuge near my unnamed female ally. Easily about forty or fifty men bustled in from the opening I’d made earlier, and some from a stairway balcony near the top of north wall.

    (part 2 incoming when double post merge disables in a few minutes)

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    The man in suit and tie made his way to me as it became clear we’d have to make an impossible escape. I didn't know his mission nor did he know mine, but all I could tell is that we were on the same side, and besides, it seemed like my mission was a bust. “I don’t know who you are, why you’re here but I know you’re not my enemy, so I’m going to need you to watch my back,” he said without hesitation.

    “I’m Lara, by the way,” she said as she nodded at my insane request for her backup, as I surveyed the troubled situation we were. The armed men hadn't found us yet, but I needed to make sure, live or die, that the doomsday device was destroyed. Two men showed up at the rear of the army unarmed, these had to be the masterminds behind this madness. Both in suits, grey and white, one with broken nose, and the other one donning glasses. Upon further inspection I recognized them as Kane and Lynch respectively. The one with a broken nose started as their men continued the frantic search for us. “You think you can stop this, 47?” Kane bellowed. “This plan was preordained long before what we know as civilization, the Mayans saw this coming, why won’t you and your cohorts accept my will?”

    “The Dog Days are over, we’re going to plunge this world into darkness and forge it anew.” He stammered on. So my suit and tie ally was called 47, and these men, Kane and Lynch wanted to exact the Mayan calendar’s will by bringing forth the end of the will as we know, and this machine would be the key. They spoke of their Just Cause, a cause to reshape the world and its hierarchy with them at the helm of this Defiance against the old world, reminding me of the Blood Omen Chronicles mentioned by my research.

    Gold, silver, platinum, and everything born of The Metal Age will mean nothing in our new world order, we will reshape the world to our fitting, and if you’re not with us, you’ll be among the Dead Men, taking out our Midway and Pacific Battlestations is of no consequence, as we’ll find and dispose of you.”
    Their little speech led me to one of my crazy ideas. I looked back to Lara and said, “Listen I’m going to need you to cover my back and follow my lead”

    I agreed with him, what else was I going to do? He put on a pair of night vision goggles, and then tossed a pair to me which I promptly put on. He then tossed a trio of grenades out of opposite sides of the little refuge that hid us. I took out my side arm, a glock, and he gave the signal as the grenades went off, and I followed he leaped over our cover.

    Having set off more bombs, I lunged over our cover with Lara at my back, both of us taking down targets that were still disoriented by the blast. I couldn't see Kane and Lynch anymore, but that didn't matter, they weren't the mission. My Hail Mary would have to do in this situation. I took out 5 EMP grenades in the hopes of completely shutting down all the lights. Setting them off did exactly what I’d hoped for, keeping Lara and my advantage intact.

    Running closely behind 47, I was making no one had a clear sight of him, and that meant taking down mercenaries, left, right, and center, and without lights, thanks to the EMPs, they were ripe for the picking in their confusion. We eventually made our way to the doomsday device, and 47 began setting up heavy duty C4 accompanied by EMP charges around the circular device. As soon as he was done, we were back to the business of fighting our way out, moving the tune of gunfire; in the hopes of finding the cavern entrance I used to find this place.

    Lara pointed me in the direction of an entrance she’d used; it had no real resistance so it was a no-brainer. As soon we found the tunnel, I set off every single explosive and EMP I’d placed on the device. Today would not be the end of the world.

    As 47’s explosives went off, the cave started falling apart behind us as mercs bellowed in confusion and pain. All I knew, was that I’d found a new world of danger, and I’d live another day to tell the tale. That is the tale of how Agent 47 and Lara Croft met and saved the world together.
    “Wait, you’re telling me you two saved the world from a plot bring back the dark ages? And now you sit here on your tenth wedding Anniversary?” the bartender asked in an incredulous tone.
    “That’s exactly what we’re saying,” Lara replied as she looked into 47’s eyes, eyes that were no longer devoid of emotion, as he sat on the bar-stool next to her.
    “We’re just waiting on our next adventure,” 47 said as he took Lara by the hand, wondering what the world had in store for them.

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    And there's my entry, rough around the edges since short story-telling is hard . Good fun though

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    Haha that's excellent Saint Dee! I'm glad that someone took the time to write a short story. Plus a good one at that!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Solitude View Post
    Haha that's excellent Saint Dee! I'm glad that someone took the time to write a short story. Plus a good one at that!
    Thanks man, had a good time writing it

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    I'll deliberate over all the entries a little later and announce the winner....

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    [MENTION=8104]Saint_Dee[/MENTION]
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    Dude! Really?! Is that the best you could do?! pfft..... it was fsking awesome \o/
    Man I enjoyed reading that! Smiles and laughs, but at first few paragraphs it seemed a bit disorientating but then when you realise the two stories come together, you have that AAAH moment =P


    Awesome stuff dude. Games will be with you shortly.

    *And a big thank you for taking part! I really really appreciate it. You're a Legend!






    [MENTION=289]Jan[/MENTION]
    Could you close this thread please and unsticky it?

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