Originally Posted by
Azimuth
May I offer you some constructive advice?
There are ten grammatical errors in the quoted text, and one broken metaphor.
When you're producing and promoting written content of any sort, it's important to ensure a high standard of quality. To be perfectly honest, I've no interest in reading a magazine full of errors. You really need to find someone who is a competent copy editor to take care of this.
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