Cool review. 
My only real criticism is a bunch of technical stuff - your punctuation needs some attention. I know it seems such a silly thing to criticise (or even notice, for the matter, heh), but punctuation is probably one of the most important, and criminally overlooked, aspects of writing. Your usage of initial capitals, for example - there's no reason to use initial capitals for the names of weapons. A pistol is a pistol. You'd only use a capital if the pistol had some sort of special name or quality which made is somehow different to a regular pistol - for example, Fruit Bat Pistol or something. You sometimes use commas instead of dashes (or an appropriate conjunction), although this usage is a very subtle one. "At the start of the game Rubi is a woman on a mission, she’s been hired to recover a case with some delicate contents."
My only real criticism is a bunch of technical stuff - your punctuation needs some attention. I know it seems such a silly thing to criticise (or even notice, for the matter, heh), but punctuation is probably one of the most important, and criminally overlooked, aspects of writing. Your usage of initial capitals, for example - there's no reason to use initial capitals for the names of weapons. A pistol is a pistol. You'd only use a capital if the pistol had some sort of special name or quality which made is somehow different to a regular pistol - for example, Fruit Bat Pistol or something. You sometimes use commas instead of dashes (or an appropriate conjunction), although this usage is a very subtle one. "At the start of the game Rubi is a woman on a mission, she’s been hired to recover a case with some delicate contents."
