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Mephisto_Helix

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So you fancy yourself a dab hand at painting/sketching/doodling .... maybe you have a poets heart .... perhaps a lyricist ready to start a band? Well, if you consider yourself an artist of any kind and feel like sharing your works, do it here and get praise or criticism from your gaming peers :D

So I'll get things started. This is one of my more recent songs, try imagine it with an Industrial beat -

American Way

A nation encased in corroded capitalist ideals
with their laws of ruin
... and republican disease
Just let them perish for their self righteousness
... their greed
See your systematic extinction (fsckers)
the destruction of the American way

We'll incite world war three
over oil wars
and blasphemy
Come metallic angels of death
rain down rain down
The Antichrist is your apathy

A nation marching to the beat of martial law
with their troops of torture
... and democratic casualties
Just let them burn for their self righteousness
... their naivete
See your long overdue conclusion (fsckers)
the execution of the American way

We'll incite world war three
over oil wars
and blasphemy
Come metallic angels of death
rain down rain down
The Antichrist is your apathy

A nation preaching their religious intolerance
with their puppet leaders
... and civilian casualties
Just let them suffer for their self righteousness
... their disease
Feel your deserved critical mass (fsckers)
the genocide of the American way

We'll incite world war three
over oil wars
and blasphemy
Come metallic angels of death
rain down rain down
The Antichrist is your apathy









(Note: only constructive criticism .... if you wanna be an ass, don't comment ;))
 
I wrote a poem.

here i sit
same as ever
took a dump
pulled the lever
the drain was clogged
the water flowed
look out world
its a mother load.
 
A poem I did in honour of my bud who lost his fight against drugs ......

By The Door

Feed me your filthy skin
and offer it to the pig ...
(PLEASE)
I'm wrapped up in madness again !
and after I just bleed away
I am the middle of nothing
so leave your fucking seduction ...
by the door

Cover me with fake despair
the ash of my dying soul ...
(HELP)
I'm tied up in sickness again !
and after I just burn away
I am euphoria in the chaos
so leave your fucking unreality ...
by the door

Forgive me for needing these
forbidden things I feel ...
(ME)
I'm drowning in madness again !
and after I just scream away
I am everything that never was
so leave your fucking oblivion ...
by the door ... pretend I never was
 
Mephisto, have you considered submitting some of your stuff to be published? I know my bro and another mate have similar poems and even though they were told to enter it, they never bothered.
 
I entered some stuff a while ago and came 4th on some website thing ...... never got around to any other forms of publishing actually. Maybe I should give it some thought again.
 
Very nice work Mephisto. I am certainly not talented in wiring poems or anything, but I definitely like those. Very deep. Keep it up.
 
A tribute to a GF that died many many years ago (put me in a bad place so very dark shit) -

Salvation

My angel killed herself the other day
(kissed by darkness)
Fell down ... just went away
she was kissed by chaos
another victim of faiths decay

There`s no one to hear my silent scream
(this crippling emptiness)
My broken soul ... this nightmare dream
I am kissed by sadness
the victim of a loss obscene

Leaving hope forever I bleed
embrace me ghostly salvation
Feed me slowly my destiny
and dance within shadows
'til my perfection

Raging lust awaken my new death
(this state of unrest)
Tearing away the humanity ... that used to be
the bloodlust burns strongly
inside of me

Leaving hope forever I bleed
embrace me ghostly salvation
Feed me slowly my destiny
and dance within shadows
'til my perfection



And another of my better songs apparently -

SYNTHETIC

Collapsed under the strain of subjection
without destiny without identity
Twisted ways of discipline
(that left us)
the victims of hypocrisy

A complex process from the past
a moment of godless insanity
An experimental holocaust
(that left us)
at the mercy of technology

Biochemical narcotic
tortured will
Remanufactured logic
for the killing fields
This control …
that leaves us synthetic

This is not what we foresaw
this chaos ... this assimilation
This remnant of our wars
(that leaves us)
on the edge of extinction

Biochemical narcotic
our tortured will
Remanufactured logic
for the killing fields
This control …
that leaves us synthetic
 
Another song for you uncultured yobs to chew on :p


MESSIAH

Static whore of your infection
I can be your icon
your godhead
your heresy
Irreligious decay of your perfection
I can be your sin
your system
your slavery
I am your mechanical messiah

Blind my eyes
burn my soul
Messiah
I am the taste of genocide
Breathe my ecstasy
feel my control
I am the face of catastrophe

Designed experiment of your madness
I am your new Christ
your prophecy
your faith
Electric perversion of your chaos
I am your sign
your abyss
your hate
I am your mechanical messiah

Blind my eyes
burn my soul
Messiah
I am the taste of genocide
Breathe my ecstasy
feel my control
I am the face of catastrophe
 
My attempt at something Lovecraft-Poe like .....


Misled by an Angel

Don't be afraid my love .....
I have a tale to put you at ease .....
a love song if you will .....
hear me out .....

I'd like to take you back
to the place of your murder
just ...
to make you understand
why I did what I did
I'd escort you my lady
to your beautiful grave
just ...
to make you realise
we are eternal and forever

(you've been misled by an angel)

You see,
I've traveled the wasteland
of heaven
just ...
to bring you the omens I saw
of why we should be
I've conquered the sanctuary of hell
just ...
to bring you
the throne of Satan
so you can be my queen
 
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